ext_50496 ([identity profile] cat-willow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] numb3rsflashfic 2006-02-07 12:58 am (UTC)

He'd been happy playing baseball, really. No one had ever shot him when he was playing baseball. ... He didn't think great FBI agents found themselves lying in the street, staring up at the sky and rethinking their career choices.

Very creative use of flak jacket and reminiscing. I like these 2 parts esp.

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