ext_16752 ([identity profile] asemic.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] numb3rsflashfic 2006-09-18 03:49 pm (UTC)

There had been marks on the skin under Charlie's clothes, Don knew, and he'd put them there.

I love this line. It's so simple but stuck out at me.

This is a perfect summation of their relationship, why it can and can't work. Wonderful work.

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