ext_8951 ([identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] numb3rsflashfic 2005-11-08 05:47 pm (UTC)

so, so beautiful! I think I especially love how Don is trying to get Charlie's attention -- like he knows Charlie nees that. And the dialogue is so kid-like and realistic -- I can just hear actual kids talking to each other that way. And I just want to hug Alan for taking such simple joy in his two sons. Gorgeous! *happy sigh*

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