Date: 2006-07-23 03:07 am (UTC)
“You have to trust me.”

Don’s eyes narrowed with frustration, and not a little annoyance. “I do trust you, Charlie. I trust you everyday....”

“Not with numbers, with us.” Charlie ran his fingers through the come spattered across Don’s chest. “You can trust me, you should trust me, to know what I’m doing. To know what I need, what I want.”


Charlie,asking Don for a visceral reaction? Refreshing. I like this a lot. It has the angst that starts early and carrys throughout their early adult years.
It always, always rings so true to me that Don would be the one who had the hardest time taking the step into the incestuous relationship.
Charlie, for all of his "book smarts" doesn't seem to have the same hang-ups.
JMO
Thanks for a great story with hot sexx!
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