Loved the playful smut...I'm glad you decided to give the boys a break.
I'm glad the playfulness came across. I've put them through so much in my last few fics, I wanted them to get a chance to play. Although from some of the feedback I've had, I think it still got a little dark in places... I can't seem to stop that!
And Don being jealous and ready to kick ass on Charlie's behalf, lol.
Well, we all like that side of Don, I think.
I'm going, man, this would have been so perfect for the flashfic challenge! And then I got back to the top and saw that it had been posted here. *snerk*
::big grin:: I suppose that means it really does fit the challenge, then!
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Date: 2005-11-08 05:52 am (UTC)I'm glad the playfulness came across. I've put them through so much in my last few fics, I wanted them to get a chance to play. Although from some of the feedback I've had, I think it still got a little dark in places... I can't seem to stop that!
And Don being jealous and ready to kick ass on Charlie's behalf, lol.
Well, we all like that side of Don, I think.
I'm going, man, this would have been so perfect for the flashfic challenge! And then I got back to the top and saw that it had been posted here. *snerk*
::big grin:: I suppose that means it really does fit the challenge, then!