Very nice. But I particularly love this paragraph:
Charlie thought about what Don had said about fucking Charlie over his desk at the FBI office. Charlie knew that his fantasies had gotten a lot more . . . inventive . . . since he and Don had gotten together, and many of them -- well, if he was honest, most of them -- included the opportunity for discovery. Charlie wondered sometimes if that wasn’t because he and Don couldn’t talk about their relationship, couldn’t be open about it with their friends and family, and this was the only way they could share their relationship, by being found out. Maybe Don had some of those very same demons.
Spot on. I definitely see that as an aspect of their relationship.
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Date: 2007-05-25 12:38 am (UTC)Charlie thought about what Don had said about fucking Charlie over his desk at the FBI office. Charlie knew that his fantasies had gotten a lot more . . . inventive . . . since he and Don had gotten together, and many of them -- well, if he was honest, most of them -- included the opportunity for discovery. Charlie wondered sometimes if that wasn’t because he and Don couldn’t talk about their relationship, couldn’t be open about it with their friends and family, and this was the only way they could share their relationship, by being found out. Maybe Don had some of those very same demons.
Spot on. I definitely see that as an aspect of their relationship.