Very nice story... the lyrics cut drew me in lol Once I started reading I couldn't stop :)
LOVED the character of Todd, you fleshed him out very nicely in just one story... I'm gonna expect to see him pop out in Numb3rs new season now lol. Nice touch with the martial arts btw... each brother excelling at something different.
I really felt for Todd when he described what happened to him. I was with Don though... I wanted to find these guys and kill them *conjures fireball* I can understand why Todd killed him even while I wouldn't condone it. It was nice how Todd found love though :).
Are you going to do another story with Todd? like maybe a backstory of Todd going to therapy and falling for Brad? Girl can hope lol ;-)
Anyways, awesome job on the story *hugs* Keep up the good work!
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Date: 2007-07-04 06:02 pm (UTC)Once I started reading I couldn't stop :)
LOVED the character of Todd, you fleshed him out very nicely in just one story... I'm gonna expect to see him pop out in Numb3rs new season now lol. Nice touch with the martial arts btw... each brother excelling at something different.
I really felt for Todd when he described what happened to him. I was with Don though... I wanted to find these guys and kill them *conjures fireball*
I can understand why Todd killed him even while I wouldn't condone it.
It was nice how Todd found love though :).
Are you going to do another story with Todd? like maybe a backstory of Todd going to therapy and falling for Brad?
Girl can hope lol ;-)
Anyways, awesome job on the story *hugs* Keep up the good work!
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ignore any typos lol