spikedluv: (n3: charlie - blank by lila)
it only hurts when i breathe ([personal profile] spikedluv) wrote in [community profile] numb3rsflashfic2008-10-10 07:37 am

Ghost by Spikedluv (Challenge #74: Ghost)

Title: Ghost
Pairing/Characters: Charlie (Don/Charlie very mildly implied)
Rating/Category: PG13/Gen (Slash very mildly implied)
Word Count: 100 words
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Charlie didn’t believe in ghosts.
Notes/Warning: Incest very mildly implied; character death implied.
Written: October 10, 2008



Charlie didn’t believe in ghosts. He didn’t believe that psychics could speak to loved ones in the afterlife. Sometimes he wasn’t even sure that he believed in an afterlife.

Charlie believed that numbers and science could explain everything about the world, even if we didn’t yet know enough to understand that explanation.

Which is why, when he heard Don’s laughter on the breeze, or smelled Don’s cologne while he was watching a hockey game, or felt Don’s fingers brush his hair back just before he fell asleep, Charlie knew that Don wasn’t really there, that it was just his imagination.

[identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this breaks my heart in the best ways.

[identity profile] clairelesley.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This says such a lot in so few words....
Just beautiful!

[identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, poor Charlie! :sniffs: Plz can I haz happy fic nao?

[identity profile] admiralandrea.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I shall have to re-read your ficathon fic to cheer me up!

[identity profile] just-air-left.livejournal.com 2008-10-11 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
aww that broke my heart in the best way possible

[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com 2008-10-11 09:22 am (UTC)(link)
Sad and bittersweet. Thanks for the character death warning though.