Mountain High by ALF (challenge #27 Keys)
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numb3rsflashficTitle: Mountain High
Pairing/Characters: Don/Charlie
Rating/Category: NC17
Word Count: 818
Summary: Don/Charlie, a cabin in the mountains and a hot tub
Notes: Yay, I finally get to post a story for the current challenge! This sprung to mind as soon as I saw the subject of the challenge. This is dedicated to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
sara_merry99 as a reward (punishment?) for being a prolific commenter on my LJ.
"I've got it," Don said triumphantly, dangling keys in front of Charlie's face.
Charlie looked up from the journal he was reading. "Got what?" he asked.
"The cabin in the mountains," Don said, waggling the keys he held.
Charlie looked up again, his attention still mostly on his journal. "The one that belongs to your ATF friend?"
"That's the one," Don smiled at him. "It's ours for a whole week."
Charlie dropped the journal and sat up. "Really, Don? Man, that's great! When do we leave?"
"As soon as you're packed," Don said, laughing at Charlie's sudden enthusiasm.
Charlie bounced to his feet. "Give me ten minutes and I'll be ready," he announced.
"You got it, buddy," Don grinned, watching Charlie hurry up the stairs. This was going to be a great week, just the two of them, the great outdoors and lots and lots of privacy.
***
The cabin was everything Don's buddy, Marty, had said it would be. Despite being set in the mountains, it still had plenty of luxuries, including running hot water, a hot tub and a huge bed, as well as a large open fireplace to lounge in front of during the cooler evenings.
Charlie looked around and whistled in pleased admiration. "Nice," he approved, eyes sweeping over everything visible in the open downstairs area.
"Glad you like it," Don said, heading for the stairs. "How 'bout we get unpacked then try out the hot tub."
Charlie followed him quickly. "Sounds great," he agreed.
It only took them a few minutes to unpack the minimal clothing they'd brought, then Don sent Charlie to get the tub ready, while he opened a bottle of wine and prepared some snacks for them to nibble on.
Don carried his tray of goodies out to the verandah, finding Charlie already naked and about to step into the steaming water. He paused in the doorway, watching the muscles in Charlie's ass flex as he stepped into the tub. He knew he must have made a noise when Charlie looked up at him and grinned, that knowing sexy grin, which did things to Don's libido every time he saw it.
Charlie slid slowly into the water, eyes drooping half-closed as he hummed in appreciation at the heat of the water. Don hastily discarded the tray and threw his clothes off as quickly as possible, suddenly desperate to be close to Charlie.
As he joined Charlie in the tub, though, Don couldn't help his own moan of bliss at the sensation of heat enveloping his body. Charlie's low chuckle made him force open eyes he hadn't realized he'd closed and he found Charlie watching him with lust and approval in his gaze. Don smiled at him and settled down in the water, holding his breath as he ducked all the way under for a moment, then surfaced again, a lot closer to Charlie, surprising him with his sudden reappearance.
They both leaned forward and met halfway in a deep, thorough kiss, mapping the familiar contours of each other's mouths, until they were breathless with desire and the need to come. Moving closer, Don took Charlie's cock in hand, loving the feel of it, hard and throbbing where Charlie was so close to the edge. Don stroked him firmly, knowing just how to touch Charlie to bring him maximum pleasure. It didn't take long before Charlie's head fell back and he let out a loud moan of pleasure, spurting over Don's hand and into the water.
Don gentled him through the aftershocks, kissing his neck and throat, ignoring the throbbing of his own cock, as he watched Charlie recover. Then Charlie shifted position, signaling a return to consciousness and reached out to kiss Don.
"What do you want?" he asked, breaking free of Don's addictive taste. He ran a hand down Don's chest, teasing him as he played with the hair, gently tugging on it, before allowing his hand to rest next to Don's hard, red cock.
Don moaned a little, on edge from watching Charlie's orgasm and the teasing touches. "Just touch me," he begged, hips arching up in a silent plea for stimulation.
Taking pity on him, Charlie moved his hand down to grip Don's cock. He was just as expert at bringing Don off as his brother was with him and it wasn't long before Don was at the edge. A twist and a squeeze, and Don was taking his turn at adding his come to the warm water. Charlie matched Don in his aftercare as well, until they were lazily kissing each other, sated and relaxed.
Remembering the tray he'd prepared, Don pushed himself to his feet and climbed out of the tub to fetch it. They would spend a little more time here, just relaxing and recovering, then maybe they'd go try out the big bed upstairs. They had all week to enjoy themselves after all.
Pairing/Characters: Don/Charlie
Rating/Category: NC17
Word Count: 818
Summary: Don/Charlie, a cabin in the mountains and a hot tub
Notes: Yay, I finally get to post a story for the current challenge! This sprung to mind as soon as I saw the subject of the challenge. This is dedicated to
sara_merry99 as a reward (punishment?) for being a prolific commenter on my LJ."I've got it," Don said triumphantly, dangling keys in front of Charlie's face.
Charlie looked up from the journal he was reading. "Got what?" he asked.
"The cabin in the mountains," Don said, waggling the keys he held.
Charlie looked up again, his attention still mostly on his journal. "The one that belongs to your ATF friend?"
"That's the one," Don smiled at him. "It's ours for a whole week."
Charlie dropped the journal and sat up. "Really, Don? Man, that's great! When do we leave?"
"As soon as you're packed," Don said, laughing at Charlie's sudden enthusiasm.
Charlie bounced to his feet. "Give me ten minutes and I'll be ready," he announced.
"You got it, buddy," Don grinned, watching Charlie hurry up the stairs. This was going to be a great week, just the two of them, the great outdoors and lots and lots of privacy.
***
The cabin was everything Don's buddy, Marty, had said it would be. Despite being set in the mountains, it still had plenty of luxuries, including running hot water, a hot tub and a huge bed, as well as a large open fireplace to lounge in front of during the cooler evenings.
Charlie looked around and whistled in pleased admiration. "Nice," he approved, eyes sweeping over everything visible in the open downstairs area.
"Glad you like it," Don said, heading for the stairs. "How 'bout we get unpacked then try out the hot tub."
Charlie followed him quickly. "Sounds great," he agreed.
It only took them a few minutes to unpack the minimal clothing they'd brought, then Don sent Charlie to get the tub ready, while he opened a bottle of wine and prepared some snacks for them to nibble on.
Don carried his tray of goodies out to the verandah, finding Charlie already naked and about to step into the steaming water. He paused in the doorway, watching the muscles in Charlie's ass flex as he stepped into the tub. He knew he must have made a noise when Charlie looked up at him and grinned, that knowing sexy grin, which did things to Don's libido every time he saw it.
Charlie slid slowly into the water, eyes drooping half-closed as he hummed in appreciation at the heat of the water. Don hastily discarded the tray and threw his clothes off as quickly as possible, suddenly desperate to be close to Charlie.
As he joined Charlie in the tub, though, Don couldn't help his own moan of bliss at the sensation of heat enveloping his body. Charlie's low chuckle made him force open eyes he hadn't realized he'd closed and he found Charlie watching him with lust and approval in his gaze. Don smiled at him and settled down in the water, holding his breath as he ducked all the way under for a moment, then surfaced again, a lot closer to Charlie, surprising him with his sudden reappearance.
They both leaned forward and met halfway in a deep, thorough kiss, mapping the familiar contours of each other's mouths, until they were breathless with desire and the need to come. Moving closer, Don took Charlie's cock in hand, loving the feel of it, hard and throbbing where Charlie was so close to the edge. Don stroked him firmly, knowing just how to touch Charlie to bring him maximum pleasure. It didn't take long before Charlie's head fell back and he let out a loud moan of pleasure, spurting over Don's hand and into the water.
Don gentled him through the aftershocks, kissing his neck and throat, ignoring the throbbing of his own cock, as he watched Charlie recover. Then Charlie shifted position, signaling a return to consciousness and reached out to kiss Don.
"What do you want?" he asked, breaking free of Don's addictive taste. He ran a hand down Don's chest, teasing him as he played with the hair, gently tugging on it, before allowing his hand to rest next to Don's hard, red cock.
Don moaned a little, on edge from watching Charlie's orgasm and the teasing touches. "Just touch me," he begged, hips arching up in a silent plea for stimulation.
Taking pity on him, Charlie moved his hand down to grip Don's cock. He was just as expert at bringing Don off as his brother was with him and it wasn't long before Don was at the edge. A twist and a squeeze, and Don was taking his turn at adding his come to the warm water. Charlie matched Don in his aftercare as well, until they were lazily kissing each other, sated and relaxed.
Remembering the tray he'd prepared, Don pushed himself to his feet and climbed out of the tub to fetch it. They would spend a little more time here, just relaxing and recovering, then maybe they'd go try out the big bed upstairs. They had all week to enjoy themselves after all.
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Date: 2006-11-26 07:08 pm (UTC)I love having a story that's dedicated to me! Especially a nice hot one like this! :)
And hot tub sex is a good thing. :)
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Date: 2006-11-26 07:09 pm (UTC)Muse willing, there may be sequels...
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Date: 2006-11-26 07:30 pm (UTC)Sequels sounds nice!
::Pets the pretty muse::
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Date: 2006-11-26 07:44 pm (UTC)(BTW, am really enjoying True Liberty)
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Date: 2006-11-26 08:01 pm (UTC)I'm getting some serious thoughts about editing it. HOpefully I won't get intimidated or chicken out this time.
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