Paean of Praise by ALF - Challenge #6 - Obsession

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Title: Paean of Praise
Author: ALF
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Rating: R
Word Count: 380
Summary: Charlie admires Don
Disclaimer: Not mine, not profiting
A/N: See author's comments at the end of the story. AU and a sequel to California Dreamin'




Charlie is sitting on the back porch, bundled up in his big jacket; clutching a mug of hot chocolate and watching Don chop wood for their fire. Even though the temperature is close to freezing, Don is stripped to his muscle shirt, body gleaming with sweat as he works the ax. Charlie shifts a little in his seat, turned on by the view and the memories.

At different times, he is obsessed with different parts of Don's body. Currently, his hands are occupying Charlie's imagination. Not that he doesn't love Don's cock, the hard, thick length filling him, giving him unimaginable pleasure. Or the feel of Don's taut ass under him, Charlie's cock returning the pleasure. And that mouth. Whether it is licking, kissing or sucking him, Charlie enjoys Don's mouth on him. He eyes the red lips, parted as Don breathes heavily from his exertions. That mouth has given Charlie great pleasure.

But the hands. Don has such graceful hands, yet they can be deadly too. Charlie remembers those hands bloodied from taking on bullies for Charlie when they were kids, has seen them handle a gun or a baseball bat with equal ease. They have danced across a piano, providing sweet music. But Charlie loves Don's hands best of all when they are on him, giving him pleasure. They caress him knowingly, teasing and tantalizing him, unerringly finding all his hot spots. They stroke his cock with just the right amount of pressure, or glide deep in his ass, opening him for Don's cock, rubbing his prostate, sending Charlie spiraling over the edge into orgasm.

Yes, today, Charlie is obsessing over Don‘s hands. He can hardly wait for Don to finish chopping the wood, so that they can go inside and share a shower, allowing Charlie to feel Don's hands on him again. Just that thought is enough to make Charlie shudder, cock hard inside his jeans, as he wonders how much longer Don is going to make him wait. And then Don looks over at him and gives him that special smile, the one that makes Charlie's knees weak and his stomach fill with butterflies and he knows it won't be much longer now. Don can't resist Charlie for long, any more than Charlie can resist Don.

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Author's Notes

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

Yes, I went back in time to challenge #6 for my inspiration. I had this fic in mind for a while - Charlie obsessing about Don's hands, but had no context to it. I've been obsessing myself about California Dreaming as sung by the Beach Boys lately and wanted to add to the story I wrote which was directly insipired by that song. Then, today, I was listening to Spandau Ballet's Greatest Hits on my iPod whilst out food shopping. My favourite song on there is Musclebound and I began playing with different mental images of what Charlie could be watching Don doing, whilst thinking about his attributes *g* Chopping wood came to mind, and I thought cabin holiday. Then I thought California Dreaming - they'd need a fire for those cold Vermont winters. And so a lot of loose threads tied together to create this story. Hope you enjoy Charlie's musings ;-)

[riverotter1951.livejournal.com]

This is lovely. I like your explanation of how this story can to be written. You took loose threads and creating a magnificent tapestry.

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

Wow, that was fast! Thanks for commenting :-) Glad you liked it and my explanation. My writing process is usually a lot more straightforward - have idea, write it down. But this one took a little more work and I thought it might interest people...

[nicelyobsessed.livejournal.com]

Charlie is not the only one who loves Don's hands!
Great drabble.

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I admit, hands are a complete obsession of mine. I blame Patrick Swayze and *that* scene from Ghost!

[nicelyobsessed.livejournal.com]

Oh yes, that scene, very sensual...

[spikedluv]

I can totally see why Charlie would be obsessed with Don's hands! *g*

[admiralandrea.livejournal.com]

Thanks - I thought so too! *g*