[identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] numb3rsflashfic
Title: Pretty in Pink
Pairing/Characters: Alan
Rating/Category: G
Spoilers: None
Summary: Alan treasures the grandchild he thought he'd never get
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


She's perfect.

Pink and frills, she smells sweet like candy, like baby powder, like her mother.

He holds the baby girl in his arms and feels the house around him expand with love, the same way it did when his boys were born. He'd almost forgotten that feeling.

Alan couldn't be happier.

He takes to grandfathering, selfishly spoiling his granddaughter beyond the point of reason and all but begging to baby-sit more often.

He whispers terms of endearment in her tiny ears, calls her his little miracle as her unimaginably tiny fingers close around one of his.

A miracle of modern medicine is closer to the truth. He knows in his and Margaret's day babies this premature weren't expected to survive.

At four months old she's still tiny, but no longer delicate. She has her mother's beauty and her father's tenacity. There was no way she'd have gone without a fight.

He was sure he'd die without either of his sons fathering a child.

Now he's greedy enough to rock the baby in the old Stickley chair, letting the warmth of the house's family history seep into his old bones, and imagine the joy of adding a grandson...

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Date: 2007-08-27 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicelyobsessed.livejournal.com
This is very sweet and I love that line : "She has her mother's beauty and her father's tenacity" She's a strong baby Eppes!

Date: 2007-08-27 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicelyobsessed.livejournal.com
I thought it was Don's daughter too.

A drabble in french? I'm sure your french is better than my english ^^
Go girl!!!

Date: 2007-08-28 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicelyobsessed.livejournal.com
Maybe I should answer to your comments in french? ^_-

I did a Numb3rs ficlet in english too (Charlie/Ian), it was hard to do but my betas were wonderful!
I'm sure [livejournal.com profile] castalie will be a great beta.
*hugs*

Date: 2007-08-27 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elysium1996.livejournal.com
Just the sweetness that I could see with Pop Pop Alan.

Date: 2007-08-28 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fejaih.livejournal.com
*sigh* Can I make it into an ornament and hang it on a Christmas tree?

...Was that overly random?

And, after reading throuh your other comments, I kinda like that it's Don's baby girl. Thinking about how he would raise a daughter is all kinds of warm and fuzzy.

Finally, if she wasn't tenacious, she wouldn't be an Eppes. ;)

Date: 2007-08-28 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fejaih.livejournal.com
He's too self-absorbed.

It's almost weird to use those words in relation to Charlie, just because he's not the "normal" kind of self-involved (showy, talks too much, thinks too highly of himself, etc.), but it's so true. He would forget to feed them. And maybe ignore crying in favor of finishing his thought... which would invariably lead to a new thought...

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